WRITING 3 MEETING 8

Explain Why Teens Smoke Cigarettes

 

Smoking can’t be denied in this era. Old, young, men, women, and almost all of them are smoke. The person found with smoking can calm their mind, make you relax, reduce anxiety and others. A lot of cigarette advertising that states that banned, smoking can cause respiratory disorders, infertility, cancer, and stroke. But it does not make the smokers to stop smoking deterrent, a sense of calm and addictive cigarettes are given by one of the factors it hard to stop smoking. More than 80,000 young people around the world start smoking every day. Most people start smoking when they are teenagers, which make it more difficult to quit. The earlier the habit begins, the harder it is it to stop, although many teenagers make multiple attempts to stop smoking. There are three main reasons why teens start smoking which is boredom, lose the weight and as a response to the stress of school and family life. Just like the teens like to act as if they are someone special or dangerous. By smoking they can act on those feelings. Because it is so forbidden it becomes more alluring to teens. The problem is that when they take that first, they can become addicted. The idea that they are breaking the law or going against their parents and schools is an addiction within itself. Kids like to get attention; it does not matter if it’s good attention or bad attention. They crave attention and by smoking they get big attention. The other teens look at them in all kinds of ways and the adults get upset and don’t know what to do. As the research, some teenagers, especially girls, smoke in an effort to lose extra pound. Quit states that the nicotine in cigarettes can suppress a teenager's appetite, satisfy her cravings and keep her busy so that she does not think about food. In a culture that obsesses over how someone looks, smoking may allow teens to achieve the appearance needed to gain social acceptance. “Some teens begin smoking because their friends smoke and they want to be liked and accepted,” according to the CBC News. Many adults who began smoking as teenagers acknowledge that their friends gave them their first cigarette and that they began smoking because it was acceptable behavior. Many teenagers fear rejection, so to avoid embarrassment that they may smoke as a way to appear tough and be rebellious. They think that by smoking they can be accepted in society or a group. The biggest problem is they are forbidden by their parents to smoke but by lying to parent outside the house to follow other friends who smoke. Not infrequently they put their spending money to buy cigarettes, they usually smoke outside the home, and do not smoke while inside the house because they know their parents will be angry. Smoking at a young age may favor but all the toxins, and the contagion will occur at a time when parents feel. Smoking reduces the period of our lives. 

Writing 3 Meeting 7

THE PLACE YOU FEEL SAFE

My Home

The place that you feel safe is that everywhere, everytime that you can be feel comfort and safe is a home. Although you were in the messy place,dirty place, or anything else, but you stay safe it can be called your safe place. I think the place that make me feel safe is home. Because home is a place that make me feel safe, happy, comfort, enjoy and anything i get in a home. Nothing place that more better than home. Although the home are ugly, dirty, and small, but home keep us comfort and feel safe. In home, you can tell all about your problems, your ideas, and you can rest your body in home, you can get a comfortable life in home than in outdoor home, in home you can meet and gathered with your family.

          Especially in my home, my home is very comfortable and feel safe with quite atmosphere, my home located in Jati Indah estate but it is not big but longer with small fields. The first, my home has two living rooms, one family room, four bedrooms, four bathroom, one kitchen, and my home has  second floor. In my house, I felt comfortable, safe, happy and I think my home is the most comfortable place in my life. I never feel bored, lonely in home. My home give me a color of my real comfortable house. My home is the place to come back anytime. 
            So many people in the world have home, but they ever feel like not on the home. They are that spend all time in work and outdoor. Office, building, hotels, they often forget they home. That because, the home as we can feel safe and comfort became a second place in our life.

Writing 3

The Description Of Narrative Writing

What is Narrative?

Narrative writing in fiction and non-fiction (and even poetry) tells others the stories of our personal experiences and allows us to gain empathy and sympathy about the world around us. 

A narrative is the story (fiction or non-fiction) told and the order in which it is told.   Sometimes, there is a narrator, a character or series of characters, who tell the story. Sometimes, as with most non-fiction,  the author himself/herself in the narrator.   

Why Write Narrative?

Narrative writing is very important in your day-to-day life.  For the rest of your life, you will write texts, e-mails, cover letters, blogs, etc. about  your beliefs,  your ambitions, information you know, and feelings you have.  What could be more important?

How to differ from other writing genres?

First, the main purpose of this genre is to entertain through storytelling and to engage the reader in an imaginative experience.  Typical examples of narratives that children will encounter take the form of fairy tales, myths and legends.

Second, see the characteristics :

• The form of a story about an event or experience of the author.
• Incident or event that is delivered in the form of events that actually occurred, can be sheer imagination or a combination of both.
• Based conflict, because without conflict usually uninteresting narrative.
• It has aesthetic value.
• Emphasize the chronological arrangement.

The steps how to make a narrative writing

• Determine the first theme and the message to be delivered

• Example : Rapunzel

• Set the target reader
• Design of the main events are shown in schematic form the groove .

• Example : Long, long ago in a house that overlooked a beautiful garden lived a childless couple. They prayed to God every day to bless them with a child. One day they found that God had answered their prayer. They were at long last going to have a baby!

• For the main event in the beginning, progress, and end of story.

•  Example :

Long, long ago in a house that overlooked a beautiful garden lived a childless couple. They prayed to God every day to bless them with a child. One day they found that God had answered their prayer. They were at long last going to have a baby!	beginning
Their days passed in happiness but alas! the wife fell ill. She would eat nothing and the husband was worried that she would waste away. He tried to tempt her with many good things but she refused everything. “But you must eat something, my dear,” he begged her. “There is a herb called Rapunzel in the garden next door. I will feel better if I can eat that,” she said. The husband’s heart sank when he heard her. This garden was owned by a wicked witch who would let no one enter. But he loved his wife very much and so with a pounding heart, he decided to go into the garden at a time when the witch was away. One day, finding an appropriate time he went into the gar den. He had managed to pluck the herb but as he was about to leave, the wicked witch came back. “You thief! How dare you enter my garden?” she screamed. She threatened to put a curse on him. He fell at her feet and begged, “Please don’t curse me. If my wife doesn’t eat this herb, she will die. She is going to have a baby and is very ill.” The witch stopped to think awhile. “I will let you go on one condition. You will give me the baby after it’s born.” The poor man had no other way out but to agree. He took the herb to his wife and miraculously she soon recovered and gave birth to a beautiful girl. But as per the agreement the witch came to take the baby away. She took Rapunzel—for that’s what she named her—far away and locked her in a high tower. The tower had no doors or stairs. There was only a window on top. The only person whom Rapunzel ever saw was the wicked witch. Rapunzel grew up to become beautiful with pretty eyes, a beautiful voice, and her golden hair grew very, very long. All day long, when Rapunzel was alone, she would sing and weep. Every day, the wicked witch came to the tower with food. She stood at the bottom of the tower and shouted. “Rapunzel! Rapunzel! Let your hair down!” Rapunzel would drop her long, braided hair through the window. The witch used the hair as a rope to climb into the tower. One day, a handsome prince was passing by and heard her sing. He fell in love with her voice and unknown to all came to the tower every day to hear her sing. One day, the prince saw the witch climbing up the tower using Rapunzel’s hair. The next day, the prince too called out to Rapunzel. “Let down your hair,” he said. The prince climbed to the top of the tower. After that, the prince came to meet Rapunzel every night. Alas! the witch soon discovered the prince with Rapunzel. She pushed him from the tower onto a thorny bush, making him blind. She banished Rapunzel into the desert far away. Many years passed. The blind prince wandered alone and finally reached the same desert. One day, he heard familiar voice singing. Following the sound he found her. They hugged each other in joy. Tears of happiness rolled down Rapuzel’s cheek. As the tears fell on the prince’s eyes, he regained his vision.	progress
The prince took Rapunzel to his kingdom and they lived happily ever after.	end of story

• Details of major events in the event details as supporters story
• Develop character and characterization, setting, and point of view

•  Example :

Character	Rapunzel, the prince, the wicked, childless couple.
Setting	Place : the beautiful garden, kingdom, the tower. Time : all day long, every night.
Point of view	The second people

• understand the rules of punctuation in the sentence
          Example : ( . , / ? “ ! )

Snow White And The Seven Dwarfs

           Once upon a time there lived a lovely princess with fair skin and blue eyes. She was so fair that she was named Snow White. Her mother died when Snow White was a baby and her father married again. This queen was very pretty but she was also very cruel. The wicked stepmother wanted to be the most beautiful lady in the kingdom and she would often ask her magic mirror, “Mirror! Mirror on the wall! Who is the fairest of them all?” And the magic mirror would say, “You are, Your Majesty!” But one day, the mirror replied, “Snow White is the fairest of them all!” The wicked queen was very angry and jealous of Snow White. She ordered her huntsman to take Snow White to the forest and kill her. “I want you to bring back her heart,” she ordered. But when the huntsman reached the forest with Snow White, he took pity on her and set her free. He killed a deer and took its heart to the wicked queen and told her that he had killed Snow White. Snow White wandered in the forest all night, crying.
           When it was daylight, she came to a tiny cottage and went inside. There was nobody there, but she found seven plates on the table and seven tiny beds in the bedroom. She cooked a wonderful meal and cleaned the house and tired, finally slept on one of the tiny beds. At night, the seven dwarfs who lived in the cottage came home and found Snow White sleeping. When she woke up and told them her story, the seven dwarfs asked her to stay with them. When the dwarfs were away, Snow White would make delicious meals for them. The dwarfs loved her and cared for her. Every morning, when they left the house, they instructed her never to open the door to strangers.
Meanwhile, in the palace, the wicked queen asked, “Mirror! Mirror on the Who is the fairest of them?"
The mirror replied, White is the fairest of them all! She lives with the seven dwarfs in the woods!” The wicked stepmother was furious. She was actually a witch knew how to make magic potions. She now made a poisonous potion and dipped a shiny red apple into it. Then she disguised herself as an old peasant woman and went to the woods with the apple. She knocked on the cottage door and said “Pretty little child! Let me in! Look what I have for you!” White said, “I am so sorry, old lady, I cannot let you in! The seven dwarfs have told me not to talk to strangers!” But then, Snow White saw the shiny red apple, and opened the door. The wicked witch offered her the apple and when she took a bite poor Snow White fell into a deep sleep. The wicked stepmother went back to the palace and asked the mirror, “Mirror! Mirror on the wall! Who is the fairest of them all?” The mirror replied, “You are, Your Majesty!” and she was very happy.
         When the seven dwarfs came home to find Snow White lying on the floor, they were very upset. They cried all night and then built a glass coffin for Snow White. They kept the coffin in front of the cottage. One day, Prince Charming was going past the cottage and he saw Snow White lying in the coffin. He said to the dwarfs, “My! My! She is so beautiful! I would like to kiss her!” And he did. Immediately, Snow White opened her eyes. She was alive again! The Prince and the seven dwarfs were very happy. Prince Charming married Snow White and took her to his palace and lived happily ever after.

Why my sentence is called as the topic sentence?

It called the topic sentence because the sentence is in the beginning of paragraphs and sentences are used as developer.