Writing 3

Identifying narrative paragraph with and without topic sentence

 

My achievement

My name is Thurpa, I am one of the student in senior high school in Kalianda. My friends know me as a feminine pinky girl. One day, I workout in the evening around the home environment. With the wind blowing and the beauty of the evening sky. Around the neighborhood of the house came the sound of children playing merrily. I enjoy my beautiful sunset while waiting for sunset and welcome the big day tomorrow.

My big day arrived, the sun greeted me with a bright, encouraging myself to against the odds. Hard work and confidence that will determine the outcome of this match. Yeah, because I was following a karate match. Number four, it's time for me to show my best performance. I faced a tough opponent. With confidence I'm sure I could win this match. My contour and suppleness is the key to win this art of karate. 

The 2 champions, yes... that I really hope and dream is come true, I won this competition. I have a medals and certificates . My parents are very proud and do not believe, because I was a gratitude always prayed to god my creator.

Believe in your ability and you will win. Work hard and you will succeed. Giving thanks is a sense of an achieved success.

*  Green = Introduction

*  Red = Complication/Climax

*  Blue = Resolution

*  Yellow = Conclusion

Plot = Forward

Characters = Feminine, work hard, and believe

Setting = Place: House,environment,match.

          Time: Evening,sunset,morning

          Situation:Nervousness,excitement,

                    and happy

The Purpose of the text:

The purpose of writing this paragraph is to explain and give examples of narrative paragraph without a topic sentence.
to provide motivation to keep fighting within or without the match.