Writing 3

A. How to Write A Paragraph With Unity Adequate And Inadequate.      
         Paragraphs can be said to have unity adequate if the paragraph has an element of completeness of facts and examples, as well as having to build sentences are related or regular order.

 B.

What is Coherence ?

-        In the oxford dictionary, coherence is the situation in which all the part of something fit together well.

-        Coherence in a paragraph is the technique of making words, phrases, and sentences move smoothly and logically from one to the order. In other words, the ideas are so interwoven and ‘’glued’’ together that the reader will be able to see the consistent relationship between them. It is obvious that if a paragraph is not unified, does not have a logical order, and does not have a consistent point of view, the reader is unlikely to grasp the point of the paragraph. In addition, there are other devices and techniques that will help you achieve coherence.

-        In general, the coherence devices most helpful for making your communication clear for the reader are transitional words and phrases, repetition of key words and phrases, pronoun reference, and parallel sentence structure.

In the other statement, coherence is fundamentally not an objective property of the produced text. Rather, that text is a by-product of the mental processes of discourse production and discourse comprehension, which are the real loci of coherence.

                                  Example

For me, the worst thing about waiting tables was the uniform. At the last place I worked, all the waitresses had to wear an ugly brown striped jumper. Underneath it we had to wear an even uglier polyester shirt. Sometimes someone I knew would come in and I'd feel embarrassed by my outfit. Now I have a job in an office, where I can wear my own clothes.  

  

C.

My Self

My name is Thurpa Dupi Oktari, I look like a sweet little girl who always wears the veil with my own style and wearing a watch in the right side. I have a small oval face with a pointed nose, a slightly slant eyes, small and thin lips. My body is high enough, and weight 47 kg. My friends often say I look like Barbie. I came from Yogyakarta, but my parents migrated and now settled in Kalianda, South Lampung. I go to school at the University of Muhammadiyah Metro and lived in a boarding house at 15 A. The best thing about me is having a harmonious family, mutual concern, and seeing my family smile. My hobbies are swimming and traveling. The interesting part of my hobby is traveling to the place you've never visited before with your loved ones. During the spare time, I usually go shopping, play games, online and sleep, because I love to sleep.

Ket:

 *yellow* : Identification

 *green* : Description